Letter to Mrs Plowright

Wednesday 27th July 2016

Mrs Plowright

Elm Park Primary School

46 Gossamer Drive

Pakuranga

AUCKLAND

Dear Mrs Plowright

I am writing to you because I  agree with you about not keeping the school holidays.

Firstly I believe that when we have school holidays children forget what they have learnt over the term because there are too busy having fun.  I feel that Saturday and Sunday is a long enough break for kids because they have the six week holidays anyway.

Our  parents don’t always have the time to look after us in the holidays they already have a lot of things to do at work and at home.

our teachers don’t need two weeks to think of a great project for their class and that’s why they have breaks of teaching.

I hope I have  persuaded you to have no school holidays.

Yours faithfully

Eliani

Reflection

We have been learning to use persuasive words in our writing. I found it easy to think of the persuasive words but hard to find were i could put it. Next time I want to learn how to use punctuation in my writing as well as persuasive words.

Autumn poem

                                             

                                     Reflection
In writing this term we have been trying to use interesting vocab eg
crying to sobbing.

I learnt how to use personification witch is when you give an animal or an object a human quality.

Next time I will try brain storm my ideas so i don,t have to keep on changing the sentences.

Kenning Poem - All About Me

             All about Me

           A computer hogger

An art creator

A fussy eater

A learner

A Movie watcher

A car traveler

A   SMIGGLE   lover

A pet owner

A minecraft

player

A caring sister

A flower sniffer

Writing Reflection

I have written a Kennings Poem about me so that other people in the class got to know more information about me. In our poem we brainstormed different ideas about ourselves.

I was able to use year six quirky words to describe my self.

My next step I was able to use interesting adjectives to describe myself eg. year 6 quirky words.

cindy and the Girls

                                                                   Reflecion
I was leaning how to write a fracterd fairy tale. I found it hard because I didn't no how to change it.  my next step is to finsh of more quick.

Narrative Writing- Cindy and the Girls

                                                                         Reflection
I was learning how to write a fractured fairy.
I found it hard because we had to change the story and make it sound different.  My favourite thing was combining the tales together. My next step to do more work on fairy tales.

My Character Description

                                                  MY REFLECTION
We were learning to write a character description.I found it hard to describe the grandpa.My next step is to write more character descriptions.

Explanation Writing Plan

                                                                         Reflection
I have been learning how to make a explanation.I found IT easy because I already new how to make a wind chime my next step is to be more quick

EXPLANATION WRITING

REFLECTION

I was learning how to write a explanation  first I had to watch a video to learn how to make a milk shake there was 3 choices there was how to tackle ,how to do elastics,  how to make a milk shake

I found it easy because i could just keep on watching the video when I forget.  My next step is to be more qiuck

Colour Poem

My Reflection
We have been learning to do colour poem using similes and metaphors. I found it hard to think of the sentences I found it fun because I have'int tried something like this before my next step is to not get side tracked.

Term 2 Week 8

                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                             Te-Tuhi

last week we took the van to go to te-tuhi.  We were to nosie so the driver put talking tom on his phone.
when we got there we were waiting for the rest of the class when they got there Jerime came through the door he told us to go to the art room when we got to  the art room there were bottles and garden plants every were for us to make.  We were making a vertical garden  we needed a bottle a maker to make it pretty our
 bottle.Once we made our bottle pretty we put stones soil and our plant in I chose beans.  When every body was finish we had a look at some art work and videos and tried to think what they used for the video.once we came back to school we eat some lunch. 

African praise poem

I have been learning how to write an African praise poem. I found it tricky

to think of an  animal. My friends helped me think of animal. I liked this piece of work because I've never done this type of work before my next step is to stay on task more.

My Postcard Recount

I was learning to write a simpel recount in oder.  I found it easy because i new what to do.But i found it tricky when i needed 

to think back.next i need to work on making it more interesting.

Did you ever

I was learning to write a Did you ever poem. I think i did great Because i said what it feels like.

 I think next i need to work on making it more interesting.