Friday, 26 August 2016

Maths evidence

I have been learning how to solve problems using PVP.  I was able to add the hundreds tens and ones easily because i know my addition well.  Next I want to learn to do PVP with more advanced problems.

Wednesday, 24 August 2016

Reading evidence-Porridge term 3

W.A.L.T : locate relevant information in order to infer ideas and information that is not directly stated in the text Porridge.

I was able to go back to the story and locate the important information.

I found it tricky to understand what the question was trying to tell me to do.

Next time I have to read the question carefully and try to have a specific answer.

Tuesday, 2 August 2016

Letter to Mrs Plowright

Wednesday 27th July 2016

Mrs Plowright
Elm Park Primary School
46 Gossamer Drive

Dear Mrs Plowright

I am writing to you because I  agree with you about not keeping the school holidays.

Firstly I believe that when we have school holidays children forget what they have learnt over the term because there are too busy having fun.  I feel that Saturday and Sunday is a long enough break for kids because they have the six week holidays anyway.

Our  parents don’t always have the time to look after us in the holidays they already have a lot of things to do at work and at home.

our teachers don’t need two weeks to think of a great project for their class and that’s why they have breaks of teaching.

I hope I have  persuaded you to have no school holidays.

Yours faithfully



We have been learning to use persuasive words in our writing. I found it easy to think of the persuasive words but hard to find were i could put it. Next time I want to learn how to use punctuation in my writing as well as persuasive words.