Wednesday 27th July 2016
Elm Park Primary School
46 Gossamer Drive
Dear Mrs Plowright
I am writing to you because I agree with you about not keeping the school holidays.
Firstly I believe that when we have school holidays children forget what they have learnt over the term because there are too busy having fun. I feel that Saturday and Sunday is a long enough break for kids because they have the six week holidays anyway.
Our parents don’t always have the time to look after us in the holidays they already have a lot of things to do at work and at home.
our teachers don’t need two weeks to think of a great project for their class and that’s why they have breaks of teaching.
I hope I have persuaded you to have no school holidays.
We have been learning to use persuasive words in our writing. I found it easy to think of the persuasive words but hard to find were i could put it. Next time I want to learn how to use punctuation in my writing as well as persuasive words.