All about Me
A computer hogger
An art creator
A fussy eater
A learner
A Movie watcher
A car traveler
A SMIGGLE lover
A pet owner
A minecraft
player
A caring sister
A flower sniffer
Writing Reflection
I was able to use year six quirky words to describe my self.
My next step I was able to use interesting adjectives to describe myself eg. year 6 quirky words.
5 comments:
Eliani I like the different catchy words that you have used in your poem like hogger. I agree with your reflection, it is always a good idea to spend some time re-visiting your writing and making changes to your writing so that you are creating your best writing.
Well done Eliani,you have written a very cool and interesting all about me poem. I like the¨er¨ words you have used. Next time you could use more quirky words.
Keep up the good writing Eliani!
Great work Eliani. I really liked your year 6 quirky words like hogger and creator. Next time you could try to add even more year 6 quirky words to make it more interesting. Keep it up!
Great job on your all about me poem Eliani. I really enjoyed reading it.
That all about me poem really describes you.
Hi Eliani it was very interesting reading about you. I hope that could learn some more things about you as we have never been in the same class :)
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