Letter to Mrs Plowright

Wednesday 27th July 2016

Mrs Plowright

Elm Park Primary School

46 Gossamer Drive

Pakuranga

AUCKLAND

Dear Mrs Plowright

I am writing to you because I  agree with you about not keeping the school holidays.

Firstly I believe that when we have school holidays children forget what they have learnt over the term because there are too busy having fun.  I feel that Saturday and Sunday is a long enough break for kids because they have the six week holidays anyway.

Our  parents don’t always have the time to look after us in the holidays they already have a lot of things to do at work and at home.

our teachers don’t need two weeks to think of a great project for their class and that’s why they have breaks of teaching.

I hope I have  persuaded you to have no school holidays.

Yours faithfully

Eliani

Reflection

We have been learning to use persuasive words in our writing. I found it easy to think of the persuasive words but hard to find were i could put it. Next time I want to learn how to use punctuation in my writing as well as persuasive words.